Murder at the Polls

Gatekeepers of Democracy

Fiction - Mystery - Murder
291 Pages
Reviewed on 09/09/2024
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Reviewed by Manik Chaturmutha for Readers' Favorite

Murder at the Polls by Bill Lewers is the fifth book in Bill Lewers' Gatekeepers of Democracy series, which delves into the intricate and often chaotic world of election management. The author sets the stage for a gripping political murder mystery centered on Darin Zelinski, the newly appointed county registrar known for his aggressive cost-cutting measures. Determined to control the office's budget, Zelinski makes a series of bold and unpopular decisions, which culminate in deadly consequences. His murder, discovered at an early voting site, occurred during a fiercely contested election for a seat in Virginia's House of Delegates. The investigation is sprawling, affecting everyone involved in the electoral process—including Betty Mitchell, the election manager, and Lester Miggins, the campaign manager for Valerie Turner. As police race against time before election day, the list of suspects grows with motives and alibis conflicting at every turn, adding layers of intrigue and tension.

Bill Lewers' Murder at the Polls stands out for its deft use of the electoral setting, weaving together the mechanics of voting with the intrigue of a murder mystery. The title captures the dual nature of the novel's focus—both on a literal murder and the symbolic "political death" of ambitions and reputations. Lewers excels in structuring the narrative around the chaos of an election, creating a layered mystery that is as much about political maneuvering as it is about solving the crime. The setting lends the story both authenticity and tension, mainly as various political players come under scrutiny, their professional and personal stakes intertwined with the investigation. The characters are well-drawn, especially Betty Mitchell, who finds herself stepping into the role of acting registrar amid the crisis, and Lester Miggins, whose political ambitions complicate his involvement. The third-person omniscient perspective allows readers to piece together the mystery alongside law enforcement. This is an excellent choice for fans of political thrillers and murder mysteries, especially those curious about what happens behind the scenes in elections. Overall, this novel, with its fresh storyline, thoughtful insights, and gripping suspense, is a must-read.

Priya Mathew

Murder at the Polls is the fifth book in the Gatekeepers of Democracy Series by Bill Lewers, but it can be read as a standalone novel or as part of the series. Darin Zelinski, the new registrar, has alienated himself from most workers in the office with his aggressive cost-cutting measures at the Office of Elections. Against the backdrop of an eventful election season in Virginia, three candidates, including Valerie Turner, fight for a seat in the House of Delegates. When Darin is found murdered in a polling center, the county law enforcement dives into the investigation, questioning everyone including election workers and officials, candidates, and their families. At the onset, it looks like an open and shut case; however, as the search for the truth intensifies, the detectives realize that there is more than one motive and more than one disgruntled individual who had reason to harm Zelinski. Will they reach the truth before the end of the polls?

Bill Lewers has combined political intrigue, ethical dilemmas, and personal conflicts in a suspenseful and mysterious plot. Readers are introduced to the mystery in the first chapter. The narrative moves between dialogue-driven chapters from the point of view of different characters, reflective internal monologues, and external viewpoints like the newspaper articles in the Washington Herald. By using shifting perspectives, Bill Lewers helps readers piece together both the central mystery and broader socio-political themes. Lewers uses descriptive and introspective writing to highlight the characters' internal and external struggles. The dialogues are realistic and reveal character traits and conflicts. Lewers uses formal speech in the boardroom and political discussions, and alternates with emotionally charged conversations when it comes to personal lives. This method adds depth to the characters’ personal and professional lives. I recommend Murder at the Polls to readers who enjoy politically charged stories with elements of mystery and suspense.

Grant Leishman

Murder at the Polls (Gatekeepers of Democracy) by Bill Lewers is a political whodunnit set around a small county electoral office in Virginia. The new County Registrar, Darin Zelinski, is on a mission to cut costs in the Electoral Office, whatever it takes. Many of Darin’s decisions are seen as short-sighted and persnickety, especially by the long-term employees. With a new election season fast approaching and with three close-rated candidates in a tightly fought contest, the electoral team will have to be on its toes with many convinced that Darin’s cost-cutting measures will hinder the team’s efficiency and ability to carry out their duties. When Darin’s body is discovered in the storage room of one of the early election polling places, there is no shortage of people with possible motives and opportunities. Meanwhile, an election still has to be organized and the task falls to long-time employee and murder suspect, Betty Mitchell.

Murder at the Polls is an absorbing, well-plotted murder mystery that will keep readers speculating about the possible culprit. Author Bill Lewers has created some wonderfully believable characters whose personalities, work habits, and individual quirks will be familiar to anyone who has ever worked in a government bureaucracy or any large office organization. What I particularly appreciated, as a non-American, was the thorough education on the county electoral system that runs throughout the narrative. I had no understanding of the sheer size and scope of even a county electoral office. The story is greatly enhanced by the narrative switching between multiple differing perspectives; Valerie, a candidate, her son and his girlfriend, plus those working for the Electoral office. This variety of story arcs gave the novel the depth and breadth it needed. The author does an exceptional job of throwing red herrings into the tale to lead readers astray, as well as a complicated, twisting plot that keeps them turning pages. Although this is part of a series, it is a standalone novel and eminently readable and satisfying on its own. This is an enjoyable read and one I highly recommend.