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Your Antagonist Needs a Hobby—Here’s How to Make It Weird!

As readers, we often think about protagonists and believe they have been exemplary in inspiring us with their traits, struggles, or hobbies. But antagonists can also be astonishingly good at playing excellent roles and making an impact through their weird hobbies. A thoughtfully crafted antagonist is not simply a villain; they are an individual with traits, habits, and hobbies. If you want to make your antagonist unforgettable, try it with the hobby first, preferably one that's a little weird.

Hobbies also serve as a storytelling tool. They can:

Foreshadow character traits: A villain who paints delicate floral patterns can be portrayed as someone with a deeply hidden soft side or an obsessive need for perfection.

Act as a metaphor: A murderer who meticulously assembles jigsaw puzzles might be obsessed with control.

Choosing Your Villain's Unique and Weird Hobby

How can you implement a hobby that is unique and weird at the same time? The trick is to make it fit their personality, background, or purpose, or perspective. Here are a few suggestions:

- A Serial Killer Who is Fascinated by Make Dolls That Look Like Their Victims – Imagine a merciless serial killer who crochets little dolls that look just like their victims before the murder takes place. Creepy? It is creepy, and you can show it as their obsessive behavior.

- A Crime Lord Who Breeds Exotic Fish – A ruthless mafia boss who lovingly cares for rare and delicate fish? The contrast between violence and tenderness makes them even more unsettling.

- A Corrupt CEO Who Writes Romance Novels Under a Pen Name – What if the ruthless billionaire funding illegal experiments also writes heartfelt love stories in secret? This helps to add both irony and complexity to your story.

- An Assassin Who Makes Perfumes – Each fragrance they create is inspired by a kill, capturing the essence of the moment. Their victims' final memories are scented with something strangely beautiful.

Brilliant Examples of Antagonists with Fascinating Hobbies

Many great villains already embrace this idea. Here are some striking examples:

- Hannibal Lecter (a character in The Silence of the Lambs by Thomas Harris) is a refined gourmand and art lover. Hannibal's appreciation for fine dining takes on a grotesque twist with his cannibalistic tendencies. His sophisticated hobbies make him all the more terrifying.

- Annie Wilkes (Misery by Stephen King) enjoys reading and scrapbooking, which wouldn't be strange if she weren't obsessively keeping track of her favorite author while holding him hostage.

- Patrick Bateman (serial killer in American Psycho by Bret Easton Ellis) has an intense love for music and skincare routines. The detail he gives to those interests makes his violent outbursts far more disturbing and scarring.

Ways to Integrate a Hobby into Your Story

The first task is to find a weird hobby for your antagonist; once you find that, the second challenge is to incorporate it into the storyline. But do you have any clue how to do it? This is how:

Use It to Create Suspense: A detective sees something in the antagonist's home—a strange collection. Initially, it seems innocuous, but then it quickly becomes a major clue to their evolution or something else significant.

Make It a Plot Device: The antagonist's hobby plays a key role in the story. For example, if a villain loves preserving and stuffing animal skins (taxidermy), they might leave behind a unique feather from a rare bird they preserved, helping the hero track them down.

Create a Situation with Juxtaposition: Imagine a menacing villain who spends hours meticulously gardening. The fierce character and delicate hobby make the story more intriguing.

Let Readers Discover It: Introduce the hobby little by little. Allow the reader to slowly identify the antagonist's hobby and let them discover it gradually. Maybe the villain briefly talks about it at the start, but only later does the reader realize how important it is to the story.

To wrap it up, a good antagonist is more than just their evil deeds. Giving them a hobby—especially an unusual one—adds nuance and makes them all the more fascinating.

Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Manik Chaturmutha