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Finding Your Voice: How Perspective and Description Bring Creative Nonfiction to Life
I was overwhelmed when I started writing creative nonfiction, the idea of “voice” overwhelmed me. People would tell me, “Find your voice,” and I’d nod along like I knew what they meant. But deep down, I wondered: How do you find something so intangible? And once you’ve found it, how do you use it to tell a story? Turns out, voice isn’t something you create out of thin air, it’s already there. It’s how you see the world, the way you string words together, the rhythm of your thoughts. In creative nonfiction, voice and perspective are what make your story uniquely yours. Add the right descriptions, and your writing transforms into an immersive experience. Let me show you how these elements work together.
Voice: The Heart of Your Storytelling
Your voice is your fingerprint as a writer, it’s what makes your story unmistakably yours. In creative nonfiction, where the truth is the foundation, voice is what makes that truth compelling. When I wrote about my first heartbreak, I initially tried to sound poetic and polished. But it didn’t work. It felt forced like I was mimicking someone else. So, I went back and rewrote it as if I were telling a friend over coffee. Suddenly, it felt real. For example, instead of saying, “My heart was heavy with sorrow,” I wrote, “It felt like someone had taken a sledgehammer to my chest, leaving nothing but rubble where my confidence used to be.” It was raw and a little messy, but it was me. Your voice might be humorous, reflective, sarcastic, or tender. Whatever it is, lean into it. Readers connect with authenticity, not perfection. And speaking of perspective...
Perspective: The Lens Through Which You See the World
Perspective in creative nonfiction isn’t just about first-person or third-person narration; it’s about how you interpret and present the events you’re writing about. Imagine two people writing about the same rainstorm. One might focus on the inconvenience: “Rain turned the streets into rivers, and my shoes squelched with every step.” Another might see beauty: “The rain danced on the pavement, each drop a tiny drumbeat against the earth.” Neither is wrong; they’re just different perspectives. In creative nonfiction, your perspective shapes how readers experience the story. Are you the narrator looking back on a past event with the wisdom of hindsight? Or are you writing from the perspective of who you were at that moment, unsure of what’s ahead? When I wrote about moving to a new city, I tried both approaches. Writing from my “at the moment” self allowed readers to feel my uncertainty and excitement: “The apartment smelled like paint and possibilities, and I couldn’t decide if I was thrilled or terrified.” Writing from my present-day self gave me room to reflect: “What I didn’t realize then was that leaving home would be the first step toward finding it again.” Each perspective brings something unique. Experiment to see what fits your story best.
Description: Painting Pictures with Words
Now, let’s talk about description. If voice and perspective are the heart and lens, description is the brush you use to paint the picture. Good descriptions make your readers feel like they’re right there with you. For instance, instead of saying, “It was a small café,” I might write, “The café was no bigger than a living room, with mismatched chairs and the smell of cinnamon lingering in the air.” See how the second version pulls you in? Here’s a trick I use: lean on the senses. What did you see, hear, smell, taste, and touch? When I wrote about a childhood summer, I focused on the details: “The air was thick with the smell of sunblock and freshly cut grass. Cicadas droned like tiny lawnmowers, and the ice cream truck’s jingle felt like a promise I couldn’t wait to cash in on.” Suddenly, the scene wasn’t just a memory; it was a place my readers could step into. But be careful; too much description can slow your story down. Focus on details that matter. If you’re writing about a childhood memory, the color of your socks probably isn’t relevant, unless those socks tell us something about your experience.
How It All Comes Together
Voice, perspective, and description don’t work in isolation; they enhance each other. Your voice determines how you describe things, and your perspective decides what you describe. For example, in an essay about a family dinner, my voice might be humorous, my perspective might focus on the chaos, and my descriptions would reflect that: “The turkey was carved with all the precision of a chainsaw. Aunt Linda’s laughter rang out like a foghorn, drowning out Dad’s attempts to say grace.” But if I wanted a more sentimental tone, I’d shift my voice and descriptions: “The turkey sat golden and steaming in the center of the table, a labor of love shared with laughter and clinking glasses.” Same event, two completely different experiences.
Lessons from the Page
If you need inspiration, look to masters of creative nonfiction. Joan Didion’s voice is unmistakably her—cool, sharp, and observant. In The Year of Magical Thinking, she describes grief with such rawness that you feel it in your bones. Or take Annie Dillard’s Pilgrim at Tinker Creek, where her descriptions of nature are so vivid you can hear the rustle of leaves and feel the crunch of dirt underfoot.
Finding Your Voice and Perspective
If you’re unsure of your voice, start by writing the way you speak. Don’t overthink it. Your natural voice will shine through. Perspective comes from asking yourself, “What do I want readers to take away from this?” And when it comes to description, don’t just tell readers what happened, show them. Invite them into your world with sensory details that make your story unforgettable. Creative nonfiction is at its best when it feels personal, vivid, and alive. Your voice and perspective make your story unique, and your descriptions make it real. When these elements work together, you don’t just tell a story, you create an experience. So, the next time you sit down to write, don’t just think about what happened. Ask yourself how you can make your readers see it, feel it, and live it with you. That’s the magic of creative nonfiction.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Chad Richins